heavicedcoffee

The story is interesting. Except for some minor grammar and punctuation errors, we can fix that :) Nonetheless, I think the author is doing a great job! Keep on writing... you're almost there :)

I don't know if I'm an Avengers fan? But definitely, I loved Tony Stark! Good job, Author! Keep it up! This story has so much potential, and you got it!

Wow, tho I'm not used to bl series/stories, but I liked how dark this story is. I mean, the author could tweak the whole story and make it about the mysterious death of a fellow student or something like that. Also, I loved that it's in a Korean setting. Overall, this book has so much potential.

Thank youuuuu~~~ <3 <3 :''>

Actually, it's EXO Suho lmao anyway, thanks for this comment! :)

No problem :)

Aside from some grammar errors, the plot and the story were interesting. Although I suggest you make their names short, most especially for the main character, so you won't confuse your readers. Aside from that, I really think you can do this! I believed in you. Keep on writing, dear :)

Wonderful! Interesting story! The plot smoothly moved throughout the whole chapter, and it makes the story beautiful. I think the author worked hard for this! Must read <3 [img=recommend]

I love how the author had written this story. It feels like she spend too much time reading greek mythologies and horror stories. I love how this story drags me into other world... and I love this darkness that surrounds your story! Overall this is an interesting, fun and exciting story! Must read! [img=update][img=recommend]

Thanks!