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Btw somehow his family is now living in villa #1 instead of villa #w taht was at start of story. Also, he went to the back to upgrade max transfer amount to 100 millions, when clerk check account, story said he had trillions in it when in early chapter it was clearly stated that he only deposited 60 billions. So I believe after copy from other stories so some same face slapping scenes happen again.

my old eview seem to be gone, anyways more discrepancies, 4th sister Ye Chan, always made bad meals or mysterious meals that was avoided by Mc and the other sister. sudden ch 390, they said Ye Chan always made good food but little under cook due to impatient. Seem like author restart story or copy another check in story around the ch 378. cuz Mc bought clothes to go check branch danglong in jinling. however he seem to been to that branches multiple times, so why employees don't remember him

Story seem to copy of different stories with a check in system. Author forget to change name some time so the mc name was Chen Yun (First day in game, I got ten billion from infinite number of check-ins) instead of Ye Xuan. Like the banquet in chapet 313-321, Ye Xuan was invited by Liu Yun but they forgot to change the name it was Du Junzhi instead. Around ch 264, Zhang Ying got ban by Ye Xuan but around ch 331, he is going to Zhang Ying's concert. There all more examples but don't remember about it atm. If the author really want to copy and paste as least remember the story and change it up.

Good story but keep on using Le Xuan (mc blood related younger brother, middle school student) name for her underling Yin Huai (classmate, high-school student). Although it does not affect story if you read the content, but if you read the content while translating, should not have gotten it mixed in first place.

So, is it going to be copying of "Journey to the West" or just incorporation of character and world? I guess only when I read on will I know.

After chapter 358, I realized that the story started to copying The Most Generous Master ever. Like divine bone, give marrow changing pills, a princess as discipe, gift sword with similar name. I figure the copy the story after making Mc losing all items and basically have start over so he can use the other author story while added a few sentences to connect Mc to time when he was in a lower realm.

Story different from book, characters broke my imagination of them.

Yes, story good so far, but grammar was probably not editing well after remind me of machine translation.

Many parts of the chapters are copy and paste to make up for word count, so annoying so I'm drop this novel.

To many repeat, so I'll just drop.