JFalcon

Great chapter! One thing I’m wondering is whether the new soul-absorbing ability he got in this version will have any importance down the line, or will it be a one thing?

Isn't it 110? 30 + 30 + 50, at least that's how I understood it.

You mean dissonance?

I see how people might dislike this change, but Bam is REALLY annoying. He already was the first time around, when I was reading the webtoon. Now that I'm having to re-read all of his stupid decisions in fanfiction, it only makes me mad all over again. I think you won't regret doing him in, and your story will probably be better for it.

This chapter was rewritten, in case anyone wonders why there are no comments on it. Reading it again after these months, the conversation between Jack and Nephis felt painfully stupid and unrealistic, so I had to make a big overhaul. Hopefully, it's better now!

Yeah, looking back now, I'll definitely have to rewrite this whole chapter hahaha

By the time they start making real money he’ll be long buried

The writing is all over the place… Is his voice sing song or monotone? It seems like the author doesn’t quite know what the words he is writing mean and just think they sound scholarly together.

I think that’s a great idea. Probably be less annoying to write as well, with less copy-pasting needed. Fate can be a very tiresome concept when you’re writing fanfiction…

The dropped Reverend Insanity fic is quite a wasted opportunity, though.