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Sorry, this story is the rewrite of two other better stories, very few new ideas with more problematic shortcomings, I'm out!!

Author maybe it's time to check on the 10-15 students you left on the roof of the university building on the first day of the story!

The author totally forgot the students that Richard left on the roof of the building? Around 10–15 of them, I hate when ideas are not completed; even if you send the helicopter to verify the roof and see if they are still there and alive, it is a distance of less than 30 kilometers, 25,000 coins for each person rescued, and I think there are no reasons not to do it. I will only read some more chapters before ruling out this story!

OMG, the author is going too deep too fast, the Goliath was 80 meters tall few chapters ago, with a shield, just looking for trouble with this one!!

As almost always happens in this genre of novels, the author simply cannot continue with the initial impulse of the historical changes that he produces in his work. After reaching point X, things start to happen just because, without check marks or even a real context, the story stops following the simplest logic, and the basis where it was anchored disappears like tears in the rain. Everything becomes an impossibility that constantly takes you out of the necessary immersion to enjoy it; only the idea remains of what could have been and was not. The author should study more about the history of the British Empire, a very important factor in this web novel, and understand that world dominance has more to do with finesse than with brute force, and how a nation with a limited population and resources could dominate the world scene for more than a century and a half was not the product of simple chance but of constant work behind the scenes with very limited flashes of force used at the right moments without causing big waves—truly a shame!!       ​    

Lo dices de broma?

Very Good Chapter!!

Good Chapter!!

Good Chapter!!

I love these types of stories, and although I frequently encounter plotholes in them, the authors try to minimize them in some way and create a coherent storyline that manages to reach an adequate ending. In this case, the author simply gave up after chapters 60–70 and simply decided to reach an ending no matter what: a plothole on top of the plothole, simply a disaster that is not worth reading, terrible development of the story and the world building without a plot, simply a disaster that is not worth reading!!