DanversVictor

with which nose

whether rush

why is he running?

The worst book I have read this week...couldn't even reach chapter 5....Your beginning is the determination of how far your book will go and if you can't even do a fantastic beginning..then there is no future for you in writing...inconsistencies, lack of imagination, lack of correlation, useless Mc, just bad

research where?

seriously!!!? just this chaoter alone has determined the future of this book or its lack

how did je survive during the apocalypse before.. e? Seems like a basic side character who truly has no significance to the story but was forcefully made a mc by an author who had nothing to do

I'm not really seeing the future in this book...you are in the world and you are still linking it to a game...just because it was said to be a game..? why cant he just assume its another realm or something instead of all this rubbish....I highly doubt I will reach chapter 20 after all I have seen till now...very depressing

could u stop mentioning his past games endeavours or something..its getting irritating

why is the smile bitter..?😒