ThreePlains

What a disappointment... the author didn't change anything

Funny how the mc just accept being chased for 2 years and still don't have resentment for hyuga and most importantly konoha, the hokage just ignore someone being chased

BTW boil release is the result of water and fire not water+earth

He goes batshit crazy for no reason

"Transmigrated into the Naruto world with nothing but a System" to say this is like " Transmigrated into the Naruto world with nothing but everything " makes no sense

Illogical mc

Fk this ... is going in circles never getting to the point

This ff is a tipical "Chapters shrinking disease"

The problem with this ff is that no one believes that random powers to be so perfect "set to be OP"

Man this feels so Edgelord... I mean he can't control himself even with 3 lifetimes... rly disappointing he just need to be low-key... and more than that, he can't let go? He already died for vengeance does he want to go through it again? Illogical