Loophus

should really give us a down vote button on here

the most random chapter like I know this is setting things up but can we lay of the drama for a few chap let him get thing sorted out with cat woman and the kid be for adding more crap. one chapter with Felicia then nothing with her, what he's going to get done dealing with goblin then save mj then have drama with Felicia and she cheats for real or she's been kidnapped this entire time after she left bla bla bla then it becomes a running trope that he has drama and then saves them at there lowest point. it's chapter 10 and not even a chapter just a preview to the coming chapters that's not even warranted in the first place we're not even that far in

the problem I have is I made it to chapter 62 and the main character still seems to be Gwen and when the focus is on him is always him just standing in is dumb armor watching or it's him fixing something with Gwen or dealing with the dumb frog that doesn't last more than two sentences or boring to read

not much to say made it to ch62 and so far the Mc not even the Mc it's Gwen and Tony with the Mc sprinkled in really no development on him like Gwen and Tony has had more development then him he's maybe did 4 things with just catering to gwin in the past 60 chapters and All it was was stand and stare it sucks people rating are clearly bots and and this is just Ai brain rot

sounds boring

it's what chinese authors do. If it was the og he'd probably just jump in the way and take the hit you see the Mc hasn't shown any real talent for anything outside of the system so they make every other man around him act deprived or pathetic in some type of way

what?

it's the start who is he who is he talking to why are they there make a spred sheet 'not on here' develop his story little to get a peek at who he is and what he's all about and then when you have it down give the brief explanation and in my option if you want to have s×x scenes in it go ahead just don't make the story about it we have enough smut and all that on here if I wanted porn I'd go to a site for that why would I come here for it or even pay for it

honestly I don't know what this is but I can tell everyone that the first chapter starts have no idea what's going on then a dumb wish list or the childish way the author writes the list even then god or what ever like all that weak then upgrades all perfect mastery, like why is this entity giving all this to him did the dude slob it's nob stroke the pickle and fondle it's sack too like none of it made sense

The first chapter was OK, then you go 3 chapter of nonsense, then 2 chapters of smutt when the story hasn't even started lost interest when the whole madem web chapter started thought it was stupid then you ask for money for your patreon why ask for it in the first place speneding that time begging for handout you could just Wright your own original dump and sell it on Amazon and still earn money if that's what your looking for instead of using others creations and destroying them like Disney