Loophus
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na faith wouldn't work for him considering the draw backs with it it would be better if he becomes a natural God through training and just gathering more power
a made up word that is thrown around and used like a insult it all nonsense don't pay attention to it
and like that completely turned a cool read into trash
I was wrong she indeed changed auther had me in the beginning there took my words and destroyed them
couldn't make her better instead just make her worse. Sasuke isn't even in the picture so there shouldn't even be a reason for her to be acting like this
did you say two chapters ago that he didn't come and his was Alice mothere that to his spot
na it's more like he already is getting skill,items,and other thing summoning pets would be cool but the main thing is it's the world of marvel summoning anime characters to it is kinda meh when you already have hundred of characters it takes away from what people are actually here for which is said in the title "marvel" not what ever the auther planned to add with the summoning characters gacha in my option it's really not needed
just curious why this time period
to many mistakes in the text to even want to comprehend what is actually happening and there plenty of girls and you could try to add other girls from the other level series they could fit in easily considering their pretty much the same or close to it
Odin son is a part of his name its not a title
young schools 5: northrim
first chapter is the interdiction to the story he spend the next 4 chapters with the start in the dungeon and chapter 6 he gets out of the dungeon and talking to the guild receptionistlittle to no background until it was randomly said he was a half elf and there was a whole beginning that was not even mentioned at all in the beginning it's a really bad mtl people need to stop doing fanfiction mtl work there all if not most always have bad grammar or the weird code that Fries the brain cells with the Chinese way of talking idk
a little disappointed
so I read through this and I gotta say I don't mind genderbent Luffy but why is the personality so different like I can understand making her a little different because it's a she but like this isn't Luffy anymore it's a completely different character altogether and I'd change about her knowing the fruit even in one piece they don't even know how many there are and just make it a new unknown type it'd make it more interesting and less bland