TurtleDrake

One of the best Naruto fanfics I’ve read. It hits you hard in the feels early but once you get past that it’s filled with funny banter and a fun spin on Naruto’s character.

I’m glad someone else shares some of my views on hinata. I don’t dislike her but found her kinda boring personality wise. Her main personality in the show was shy, in love, and that was it.

I totally agree with your rant btw. I loved the world of Naruto and many of the characters but I think they messed up big time with the plot holes, power scaling, and many of the other characters(sasuke and Sakura suck). I honestly couldn’t bring myself to get past all the fluff episodes after the pain arc. Since then I’ve just read fanfics for the story that could have been(plus I read far too much and fanfics are free, fun, and don’t require as much brain power if you just want to relax)

Why does that matter to them? It seems to me that they should support any hobby that their kid wants to try….. especially if it’s a relatively low cost one like art(of course that depends on how far they go). He’s still a kid he should be allowed to try things out lol. Anywho I’m just nitpicking great job with the book so far.

Carla’s to much of a simp for my liking. Honestly I hate both of the parents far more than any of the girls. A parents job is to provide unconditional love and protection while teaching their children. It really bothers me to see neglectful parents(especially happy ones) so I kinda want to see them suffer and break apart. Love the book btw just had to get that out of my system.

I just found this book and I don’t usually write reviews but I’ve really enjoyed the current 40 chapters and noticed no one has left a rating or review so I thought I’d do it. To put it simple this book portrays a more Count Dracula type vampire(more fun in my opinion) rather than a teenage vampire one(cough twilight). So if you like that you’ll probably like this.

Well this was a decent read. Unfortunately it seemed to lose direction after the time skip. I don’t really know where this is heading but good luck with it. I really enjoyed the beginning of this book and I’ll be sure to check out any of your future books.

Spiffing Brit?

Well I’m not disagreeing with you especially because he’s merely 15 but she probably doesn’t currently see this as romantic and in a world where people can live up to 300 years old a 9 year age difference won’t really matter much in the future.

Finally caught up. I’ve really enjoyed the book so far. My only advice is to give Charlotte more personality. Right now her only character point is that she really into the Mc and that’s kinda boring. I want to like her as she seems like a nice women but she’s so dull that I’m having a hard time connecting. It kinda makes the relationship seemed forced(which you sorta addressed in this chapter). Not trying to hate btw just trying to give some constructive criticism. Sometimes authors give a character a big personality in their brain but it doesn’t really appear in their writing.