MugoxNR

I read 53 chapters and I can say that this fanfic has very interesting ideas, the character's background seems cool and the author's choices were interesting but it stayed like that, Mc has a dull personality, he just goes from one side to the other developing his power with few well-made interactions with other characters, making it tiring to read (via Google Translate)

Lord Bones, after speaking with his wife, left confident of his victory Wife: When you return we will have a conversation about calling me an animal He died in combat (via Google Translate)

When Fujin goes to the summit of the 5 kages, I doubt he will only be able to form the allied army, he will convince the other villages to swear subordination to Konoha and they will be more than happy to fight for him kkkkkkkkkk (via Google Translate)

petition for the scene where hermione punches ron (via google translate)

I think that even if the author guarantees with all his strength that this medical ninja is good, I will always doubt her, just because she is from the Shimura clan and Root (through Google Translate)

This is one thing that bothers me about the recent developments of One Piece, even though Nika is very cool, the idea that Luffy took a "bad" fruit, the Gomu Gomu no Mi, and trained it so much that it became strong gave so much development to the story and the world of One Piece, but with the turn to Nika this plot was greatly weakened, making a protagonist destined (by google translate)

Very good, that's what makes fanfics and the work of the authors, both original and new materials, fantastic. Filling in these gaps in the original story and deepening our knowledge of that world I think this is perfect, congratulations author (via Google Translate)

Shikaku doesn't have an easy time in any Naruto fanfic kkkkkkkkkk (via Google Translate)

I liked the construction of this chapter, the demonstration of Loki's intelligence thinking about the plot of this school year was very well done (through Google Translate)

I agree with the guy above, this story is very good, a proposal for LOTM in DC would be very good since there is an escalation of power that would include the beyonders even more to see the changes that someone with these powers would make there. I would definitely read it author (By Google Translate)