Tyicius

go into Word, "Find and replace" zefa with zephyr.

This is a vastly superior translation compared to the other. So far, I'm enjoying the story.

comments are nice, but if you rely on them, then it'll hurt your writing and motivation. It's your story, your vision. If they want a character to do something different, then they can write their own story.

It's not your fault people are stupid. Even God struggles in vain against stupidity so it makes sense you are too.

That intruder...