DisastrousPride

just saying

he already was

Much better my dude.Keep it peak cinema.

You could do something like this: there were ten of Silco's subordinates (and they already had the syringes on them—none of that "Sevika handed it to them" nonsense). He tried to stop them, managing to kill four, but the remaining six still managed to transform. Realistically, he wouldn’t be able to kill all ten before they injected themselves, since they already had the syringes ready. That way, you can keep the story as you intended. My problem with this fic isn’t just that, though. You’re making Silco a recurring villain—but he’s the type to operate through proxies. He only shows up after the fight is already won because all it takes is a single bullet to ruin his entire plan. The MC could’ve shot him in the head and ended it all five times by now. At this point, it’s starting to feel like a cartoon.just kill him at this point we cant take him seriously now.and make piltover the big bad or ambessa or something .you made silco an 3rd rate villain at best. the only thing that makes him dangerous is plot(author).

is this sarcasm ?

he missed the eternal mangekyou sharingan for this ??

is this a translation ?

You don’t need to pay attention to the haters. No matter what you do, there will always be someone who disagrees with you. Since you don’t have a Patreon, I assume this is a passion project rather than a monetary one—and it shows in how quickly you’ve been putting out high-quality chapters. 605K views, 51 reviews, and a 4.7-star rating on a 12-day-old fanfic from a new author is massively impressive. Take pride in that!