MLakuru

Alpha, Omega, and now mating bonds? This is so stupid. Immediate drop such wasted potential.

This is just a copy paste of the original novel with a fmc si in the mix. Nothing really changes and nothing new happens. If you want to read this novel go find the original. This novel gives you the illusion of being decent but if you have read the original then this is just a straight copy. The mc being female doesnt really add anything fresh to an already boring world as well. I would like to repeat again that despite having a fmc the story is at least 90% identical to the original in terms of story and mc being female hardly makes a difference. Ok I have ranted long enough about copy and paste and what not.

Way too many wife's. Most of them dont even matter at all.

The mc is pretty pathetic

Please for the love of god edit your chapters.

Did you forget New Order from Star and Stripes?

Begging for a system despite pretty much being god and being able to create what he wishes. The first thing he does is begging for a system like a loser. I dont know why this annoys me but for this alone im going to drop the novel.

The only thing I want to say is that dont make the harem to big. Harems are already trash but your story is decent enough for me to ignore it. In my opinion harems ruin every story because its is so forced and unneeded just to satisfy the authors fantasy. Just dont have a pokemon collector where the mc collcts every girl to walk the earth.

Jean and Wanda are perfect for Queens because of their powers. Siduri can be a good queen for the story as well if you develope her character.

Why do you give her such big disadvantages? Despite having a system and being the main character she has no advantage over any of the other characters. She litterally cant even cultivate to a high lvl because her talent is so trash. How is she going to be strong? This is the make it or break it part of the story that will determine if I stick with the novel.Nothing is more annoying then seeing a weak mc with no chance of getting stronger constantly getting f**ked by the story with no wins. Im not some sadist who loves seeing the mc in a constant losing situation. Author you need to balance the carrot and the stick not just the stick. She needs to have a power up that can at the very least keep up with those arround her.