I thought the same

I choose Gold!

An unnecessary introduction, if this is irrelevant to the history of pokemon, I see no reason to tell it, blah, blah, blah... skynet, blah blah blah, god, blah blah blah... annoying as hell.

Wow, I'm not going to lie I was expecting an MC villain due to the tags, but rape of minors? heavy. Rape is bad enough, but of a student? He even says that she looks like a very real actress... heavy.

meeeh, I understand that the change of POV was intended to follow the book or something, but I didn't like it at all, in the book we have a whole setting and we can understand each character little by little, here we have random characters doing random things while you try get information from it. After reading almost ten chapters I'm still confused about even who the mc is. I feel like the author did this on purpose so the reader would peel back layers like an onion, but that really isn't my type of narrative preference, in fact it's among the worst types for me, it's a shame, it seemed promising if you, Reader, don't worry about it just give it a chance.

"In Pokémon Live!, it is stated that Delia dated Giovanni and was in his gang, but took a better route in life when she met Ash's father, though this might not be the case in the anime." "Pokémon Live! was a musical based on the anime, though it is not in the same continuity..." "Michael Slade stated that prior to production of the musical that he had no knowledge of Pokémon whatsoever aside from who Pikachu was. He was sent a copy of Mewtwo Strikes Back to help him study for the production. He watched the film several times before starting to understand it better." In short... it's not canon

meaningless, that's the feeling I get when reading this, the skills come easily, so you have no idea of ​​progress, the characters don't even have proper dialogue, he fucked Joy and Misty in less than two chapters, he doesn't even speak they were expressed correctly, the only line I remember is Misty telling him to run from the spearrows. I don't know what others see when they read this, but I only see robotic, meaningless and hasty development.

To be blunt, the MC is very annoying, his constant identity conflict is completely unnecessary and doesn't add as much value to the story as it is irritating. His attitude towards the characters around him is also less than entertaining and more like he's constantly walking on eggshells. When I read about it being a darker development I thought it would be very different, but now with this mc I even miss the original idiot Ash, at least he didn't have a d*c* in his a*s.

..., wow, this author impressed me, when he releases the guide on "how to write cliches on top of cliches" I'll be in the front row to buy a copy. No more, I'm out.

Thank you, I avoided a stray bullet, I hate these stories that make the simple complicated.

honestly, I don't even remember the content of it, but there is a lot of dialogue in HP, I don't know what you're talking about, dialogue with the Dursleys, dialogue with Hagrid, dialogue in Diagon Alley, dialogue on the train, dialogue in the selection and etc... from what I remember reading here, most of the dialogue was deleted in favor of a narrative summary, not that it matters to me anymore now, after all I don't remember that story.

Wow, was I the only one hoping to at least see the wedding? the story gets increasingly "better", I "love" the random jumps where all emotional development is skipped just in appeal to the development of power, that's what makes this novel have so much "life" and not seem like a diary of a stupid robot in search for constant power. It's not as if characters not linked to acquiring resources and developing power don't even have lines. What a "great" story this is, full of "vitality".

wow, very Hate, I actually saw that a lot of it talks about the word count, in my opinion it doesn't really matter if there is or not, basically you received a story for free, be grateful for what you received instead of complaining about trivia outside the plot . As for the lack of change in the story, in fact the original path has basically been traced, at least until he reaches the valley of peace, changes before that are unnecessary, after all he is Tai Lung with more memories and future knowledge, but still Tai Lung, his personality and actions are still based on the original, as is his arrogance. In general, I really like the progression of the story so far and I hope it continues.

this is a translation, the original is called: 选择精灵母亲，但是哥布林巢穴. the author is: 斑斓色苍空 In english: Choose Elf Mother, but Goblin Lair At a minimum, the translator must inform that they are a translator and where the original is.

From beginning to end I was waiting for him to revive, leave Hogwarts and develop his personal power and/or build a force or something, but after forcing myself to read the entire boring school life before he was resurrected, finally when will he escape I was left with extremely happy that the torture was over, only for a wild Dumbledore to appear and get him to be sent to Azkaban... I gave up, I don't want to be frustrated again.

to put it in a nutshell...it feels forced. The characters literally look like NPCs with ready-made dialogues, the communicative reactions also have many inconsistencies, I mean, understand that it's a medieval world, but people don't just nod their heads to everything they say to them.

As an absolute worshiper of horror, even without reading it, this story already captivated me just because of the image of the nun and its interesting synopsis. I sincerely expect a lot of chills down my spine for my future self, I confess that the mix with John Wick left me a little less interested, after all I want a horror and suspense story much more than an action and adventure one, even so, I'm still full of expectations . In the future I will come back to write a better review, but for now I will wait to release more chapters before reading.