Immortal_eve4
Just someone lost in the world
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I'm sorry for the late upload.
Hahaha thank you
This is very good that I just can't stop myself from reading it. I like Tianshi as an fl and the flow of the story is just great. There may be a few mistakes but it doesn't affect the story as a whole. Please update soon :)
I'm sensing a love triangle or is it just me? and also you misspelled museum in the first chapters. Just pointing it out. :)
Why did I laugh when she tried to kill herself? Oh, and your usage of first point of view is so good. I like how she thinks so much
Hello, so I noticed that your first paragraph was choppy and had so many commas. But overall your first chapter is great :)