Mytici
I am African American trying to go to the other world and have fun
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Did I talk about the public or did I just say that's a simplified way of saying it ? Can you read?
I see Pony as bowsette
sorry it was a little picky on my part. it's just that some of the punctuation hurt the flow of the story. if that makes sense cuz I wasn't able to tell that Able was asking to be part of the Foundations taskforce until I read ahead
The prettiest of Sona's peerage
Sorry I meant this paragraph. You could revise it to be " Bring my brother here. If I attack him, which I won't by the way, then you can contain me once again. If I don't attack him, I desire to be part of the Foundations task force. Do you have the authority to make that decision?
This is a good novel with a great beginning. I love the character and I love his interactions with the individuals in the school. It hasn't gotten to the supernatural part yet, so I'm excited to see how the author approaches it. I didn't give updating stability a high score as I don't know how often the author aims to update this work, but I do hope it's often because it's looking great. Looking forward to how he uses annihilation maker and hope the introduction into the supernatural world is interesting. p.s: I hope he could create mythical creatures or creatures from other verses. but as stated earlier, looking forward to how you play it.
Hey Author, this chapter also requires revision
This paragraph made no sense
I hope you're feeling better. and I hope the world isn't so hard on you anymore.
Oh My Goodness, you've returned
how is he pathetic? He's pathetic because he feels out of control when faced with a stronger being and is trying to give himself a false sense of control? He's a regular human that's just starting to get used to his alchemy and yet you expect him to conquer the world?
Aunt May is also a consideration here
Yessir, the OG Bleach
She knows his soul is not from the world of fate
The OG himself, The old man of the mountain
They die in the dark so you may live in the light
One of the best openings. Alongside Drawing days(Opening 1 for Hitman Reborn)