he keeps mashing stuff together forcing a terrible plot. we know palpy is sending Danvers to destroy nowhere for some reason that makes no sense again forced... we know somehow coulson and fury were having a burger at the same mcds as the mc and more forced stuff happens and now he's saying he wants to hang around and watch what's going to happen which is stupid since if we go by Natasha's age it's years out but the best is he wants to go back to the town he just had a run in with fury to buy cassettes.. none of this whole mess makes sense and is not fluid at all.

this is a good story hope you continue.

sigh.... so forced....

why are you even posting here since the story isn't even here...

story is getting more convoluted as we go.

well, first off, it was the bad writing that mashed all that together , come on fury and coulson eating at McDonald's? and the rest is just as bad from getting dog hair to how fast the DNA pops out to how the DNA of a dog from a special Russian program is open to the world... it's all crp writing. second is he leaves Earth and bam shield and Hydra means nothing . he doesn't live on earth.

and no stones in this universe, so no teseract guns

pictures wouldn't match if there were any, and they didn't fingerprint kids, and they documents would not be digital. so at that point in time, unless he was wanted or been arrested before, they would have nothing. something the author forgets is there was really no online presence back then.

reads like an ÀI, same pretentious writing as an AI spits out.

was thinking the same thing.

after billions die

kind of forced with fury, and Coulson just happens to be there, not fluid at all.

nothing really to read here so even terrible is better than most stuff here.

always liked arcturus.

what's the point of this revenge stuff. he cut them off from his bank that's revenge enough.

he could have just mind tricked them

so this is so stupidly forced, and we know Palpatine is going to send Captain Marvel after him next, which is forced as heck. there would be no reason to send an assassin after the leader of nowhere except it being forced. the story has been lacking for a while and getting worse. It really got stupid when he saved and brought rockets reject group along. no reason for, I could see bringing rocket but the rest.....

no force on earth, or are you implying nobody on earth can use it?

so if he wants to go home, why is he going to LA? He is from Missouri and his grandfather lives there. so why la

great chapter