DarkWizardZeref

rushed and shit. Harry's girlfriend is some nooname girl. You could not even bother giving a back story or name. is ever comment here paid for. just awful.

it was great but a cliffhanger this soon into the fiction. I will find you and hurt you.

I was disappointed this was here instead of a chapter. we are enemies.

this is just AI. just a pointless story with repeating AI

nope I am out. he can use devil fruit abilities. that is pointless

I will change my review when more chapters come out. I just need to peg down at my age.

one week, a chapter, and still nothing really happened. -.- are you trying to piss of the volcano?

Waited a weak for another filler chapter. it is just boring now.

another filler chapter with nothing happening . honestly, I was looking forward to teen wolf fanfiction, but this is crazy. he is literally worried about how to get a janitor job. in hospitals in Australia, we have downer cleaning, and you don't need anything to get into it. and they always need staff. I feel like you are just stalling now.

like 2 chapters in and already asking me for money.