YeshuaH

Hello! My ID is zaikophl

I'm new to this platform and most novels seemed very similar, but I'm thrilled to have found this masterpiece. The MC, Azrael, has a mysterious background, and the author's choice of True Archangel and Devil Sin names adds depth. The plot and characters are excellent, and the writing style draws you in. I hope the author continues this beautiful story that's not the typical reincarnation trope. While it's still early, it shows great potential. The poetic English is a standout. It's a treasure that doesn't rely on reincarnation or demon lords. The fight scenes could use more intensity, but character development and the writing style are fantastic. Keep it up!

Thanks!

É importante trabalhar na melhoria da escrita, mas o enredo é interessante. O autor tem potencial, embora a escrita precise de ajustes. Há elogios ao conceito da história, que envolve mulheres empoderadas e resistência à colonização. A escrita é vista como um ponto de desenvolvimento, e sugere-se uma adaptação ao formato de WebNovel. No geral, o feedback é construtivo e incentiva o autor a continuar buscando melhorias.

I was pleasantly surprised to find that the book is quite smooth and exceptionally well-written. Your ability to create a captivating narrative made me feel comfortable while reading, even though it's not my favorite genre. Your talent as an author is evident. Keep persevering and producing more remarkable works!

Thanks so much! I'm glad to read your comment

It's not my job, exactly. But I think it's good that you had that thought. Haha. Thanks so much!

Eu elogio a criatividade da trama e a qualidade da escrita, bem como os relacionamentos dinâmicos entre os personagens principais. Fiquei viciado na história e estou ansioso para ver como ela se desenvolverá no futuro.

"Although it's not my favorite genre of romance, I have to admit that this contemporary story deserves all the stars it's receiving. Even someone like me, who doesn't usually get interested in this genre, finds the plot truly engaging. The author managed to captivate me with the first chapters and the intriguing synopsis. I'm looking forward to more chapters and holding my breath to find out what will happen next."

Thanks so much