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Would be nice if NEW included only new on going or completed. Leave it as new but add status. Anyways thanks for sharing

The kid seems mc is a good guy but not. Excessively steals. He is smart but an idiot. His first hook up he plays the paramour. MC seems like he will be crazy op. When the author gave him a weakness (mana) he immediately gave him a work around. Gramatically the story is fine. I just think the story isnt for me.

Fine if you don’t multiple partners but trashing one in front of the other not cool.

This is the equaivant of a dragon ball z power up episode. The plot on how ability works that the MC doesn’t know plus potentially useless info for us. Thankfully the book doesn’t have too many chapters like this

Thanks for the review. I like kingdom building. I have been having a hard time finding something I really like lately because there is an outcry of support for op. Which just isn’t my cup of tea. I guess back to the good old library

2 paragraphs and flushed out a side character plus village vibe nice

When people are struggling themselves it can be hard to ask them burden themselves. Ask yourself, are you fostering children? How much disposable income is going to charity. Most of us are a little selfish

The more you know about bugs. The harder it is to read this. It breaks my immersion. Similar to when the forever alones write ‘healthy’ relationship dynamics or se**al relationships. I agree besides that decent premise

The note here will keep me going

I read this review. And in general I thing the psychosis and the reasons for the behaviors are probably a little too far a part. Cause for the mc psyche seems a little slower for development but at least it’s seems like a set up for character progression and not just edgelording