Zizi049

Naruto Godly Talent

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I like the story so far, i do read the MTL version. Compare to MTL version you mentioned the one you create are entirely new story and more interesting, you should mention you inspired from the MTL version, rather mention you translated from there. The synopsis also different, over there (MTL) the MC super OP and every time 'Golden List' show up, the MC will get twice the reward or more. In fact, the 'Golden List' more a less MC own system like Rebate sort of system. So, hope you don't drop the story.

Kinda short thou, i don't even managed to get the feeling reading it

Here i thought u get inspiration from Drinking Makes You Stronger in Naruto World, but after read the chapter, lol nope i guess, i bet alot comedy will shown on this one, correct me if wrong

wow, its very rare for the Author to give his own novel 3 star since this your original creation and i dare to say that as i did not see any on MTL website and i will read for that, give a good work

its seem straight from MTL but for other reader to understand here some references; Master Naruto = Third Hokage Xi Rihong/Red = Kurenai Yuhi Hope the author/editor can edit it so more reader can understand more and read enjoyable. Currently at Chapter 8

Noted, thanks for clarification

Im confuse with some stuff regarding this chapter, hope author can enlighten me. For Xatu Breakthrough or parameter i assume 'SS' but the vitality, strength and so on, only at 'S' or the 'SS' for Xatu mention here for potential? Same goes for mothra parameter at 'SSS' but the stat only shown 'SS', the only difference i spot between Xatu and Mothra, first at Blue potential and the later at light Purple, if the author mention 'SS' at blue and 'SSS' as Purple...... i wonder what aurora entitle as 'SSSS' or ....... will mention later on. Furthermore, the twin chibi also shown as 'SSS' parameter but what i see only at 'C'/'D' and their potential yet to reach purple, hope author can clarify on this. Thanks on the chapter.

the start of the story totally different to all one piece fanfic i read so far, and look promising