eccentricbeing18

I found your QQ a while back but I didn't know you where Evans. It's pretty cool you're back. I'm guessing your writing will be maturing since adulting forces you mindset to mature. Hope you're still in your A-game.

Please make his Batman more acrobatic. There's one thing that I didn't like with the old Bateman movies (pun intended), it's the fighting stunts. The fights were bland and unimpressive. Batman was trained as a ninja not a boxer who sometimes kick. People can hate on Batman v superman but Ben Affleck's fight scenes of Batman is the best.

The English names are throwing me off from the Immersion. It's like you don't even try.

Please create a Virtual Reality version of Warhammer 40k!! Imagine a galaxy at war where hope is fleeting, and the war they had was childs play compare to it. Where this is their iconic line "Forget the promise of progress and understanding, for in the grim dark future there is only war. There is no peace amongst the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter, and the laughter of thirsting gods."

Easily butthurt people like you should stop reading novels then. What racism? Are you schizo or something? Just because the enemies are mostly foreigners doesn't mean the novel is racist. It was even mentioned that every genius in every country get assassination attempts, even the mc's country send assassins. So no, unless you think that every novel who says "Murica!" is a racist novel. Most of the mc's problem even came from his own country. It's even in the title. You can't even pass over a conversation about their partnership without reading them badmouth the mc. Just because there are a lot of racist Chinese novels, doesn't mean all of them are.

Go to MHA, rescue Eri and ask her to save Kuro-sensei with her quirk.

You do realize that putting alternate timeline doesn't mean you can just mash up 30k and 40k right? Cause the inquisitors or Heresy didn't exist in 30k. It's only after the Horus Heresy where all that religion crap happened. The Emperor squished every piece of religion with extreme prejudice and firepower when he was active. The only religion that was tolerated was mechanicus because they make the guns and armors. The whole reason that started the Horus Heresy was because Horus wanted to worship the Emperor as his God.

He's a source though

I know this arc is important and very beneficial to his future but this is getting boring. There's a chance you'll lose a lot of readers before you finish this arc. You should understand that the fans of your previous arc are different from the fans of novels like warlock of the magus world.