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Bogdan7

Bogdan7

Lv5

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2018-02-16 đã tham giaRomania
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan72d
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    so how can he make so many?¿?¿

    "Hm?" The man raised a brow before answering, "Right, only I can see through all clones... The birds, all of them are Shadow Clones that mimicked real birds to perfection."
    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
    Tranh châm biếm · VQuintessence
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan72d
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    what??

    "Also, send the rest of our members everywhere! I want to know everything about Eternal in less than a month! And I want it to be mind in under three. Do you all understand?"
    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
    Tranh châm biếm · VQuintessence
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan73d
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    well it seems itachi will dominate the world when he will turn 8....and if you need to write such long explanations then maybe you are doing something wrong??

    Ch 59 Arriving to the Mission Destination
    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Tranh châm biếm · Sycore_w
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan73d
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    agree... the author made both his team mates to op....but he is inconsistent about it...so we can expect al 3 of them to be beaten by a chunin in the next few chapters....

    [AN: How many of you actually believed that Yuta managed to win the genjutsu duel against Itachi? After long training session in time-loop Yuta was managed to push his chakra control and genjutsu skills to a high level, and Itachi admitted that Yuta has better control, but Itachi is a genjutsu top1 genius of the whole world, at least in the near future he is, and he managed to win against better control using his talent in genjutsu and fighting smarted and not harder.
    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Tranh châm biếm · Sycore_w
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan73d
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    well....this was an 180 turn....

    'Wow, it seems that Hikari was held back a lot during our fight. But it doesn't matter, in an all-out fight with her I'm confident that I have a good chance to beat her, and if I would have time to prepare before the fight, she wouldn't have a chance at all. But as an opponent Hikari is very dangerous, I must keep the distance at all costs and if she gets too close it will be all over for me…'
    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Tranh châm biếm · Sycore_w
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan73d
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    did you forget how many times you wrote that the mc thinks he cant win against those 2 even if he goes all out??? even with itachi the mc should win, even if the mc uses only genjutsu....but you are making them way to OP...

    [AN: I got a bunch of comments that I want to mention here, as multiple people upset that Yuta are weaker than Hikari and Itachi. First of all - I don't know how you even came to this conclusion. It is stated that Yuta decided to not go all-out on the exam as it will rise many questions of how he managed to grow so much stronger 'overnight'. He decide to not use his strongest cards - fuinjutsu and genjutsu, and only use weakened version of elemental ninjutsu, as that will be enough to get the promotion. He already grown his chakra level to the level of an average Jonin, considering the time he spend for it, it can be said that it's a great achievement and most shinobi don't even get to that level in their entire life. If you still think that Yuta is too weak, then I have nothing to say to you, other than that there is a lot of novels of wish-fulfilment genre where MC is strong from the start, but I'm trying here to progress the story in the most 'realistic' way I envision for it. ]
    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Tranh châm biếm · Sycore_w
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan73d
    trả lời Sycore_w

    then why does the mc keep telling himself that he cant beat those 2 even if he goes all out?? and the way he reacted in this fight kind of proves it...you are making his teamates seen way stronger than they should be....

    Ch 55 Fight With Hikari
    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Tranh châm biếm · Sycore_w
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan73d
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    hope this is just his opinion, not reality....after all that training he should be way stronger than itachi....

    The fight went in the favor of the Konoha Genin, Yuta was thinking while observing it, 'It's sixteen participants, so it will be three fights for me, as I won't be making it to the finals. If what I expect from Konoha for the matches arrangement is true, then I won't fight either Itachi or Hikari until the semi-finals, where I will be facing one of them. I had a feeling that I can't win against Itachi even if I go all-out, and I won't be going against Hikari all-out either, it will be just too troublesome and I don't really have to.'
    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Tranh châm biếm · Sycore_w
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan77d
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    what??

    The moment he saw it, his fur stood on end. When he first ran the app for the first time, his name appeared.
    Good Deed App
    Tranh châm biếm · KLNovel
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan710d
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    this chapter needs grammar editing....and the plot is geting worse....

    Ch 116 Kurenai Yuhi
    Naruto : Hidden Cloud
    Tranh châm biếm · ImagineMaker
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan712d
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    from the context shown so far and from this thought, this should be just another AI generated story....

    'Let's explore what this entails,' he thought with newfound calm as the initial screen reappeared.
    HP: The Magical Gamer
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Kitamari
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan714d
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    the quality is droping ...

    Ch 92 Chapter 92: Two-Face
    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Tranh châm biếm · Sothisq
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan714d
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    about her age?? who's??

    Then I saw him along with a pretty redhead girl about her age who was dressed nicely. 
    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Tranh châm biếm · Sothisq
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan714d
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    hmmm....bad grammat latelly...

    "It is not as difficult as one might think. I believe that had he known what I was capable of, I would have prepared better. Are your friends hiding in the shadows? Judging by the camera, it's that crazy Asian lady again. It's like a reunion."
    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Tranh châm biếm · Sothisq
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan714d
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    10 times higher what?

    Deathstroke's body showed more than ten times higher than those of an ordinary person.
    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Tranh châm biếm · Sothisq
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan716d
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    euro?? it started being used in 2002 :)

    "All up?" Flicked through the pieces of paper. "Two yachts, one house, one speedboat, one racehorse… that is doing quite well, it seems… three cars, one plane, two pounds of gold, seventeen emeralds, three diamonds, two rubies, six sapphires, four necklaces, three pairs of earrings, six rings, five watches, three guns, two knives, a knuckleduster, a laptop, three cameras, two mobile phones, 11000 real (Brazil currency), 51000 peso, 30000 US Dollars, 15000 British pounds, 26000 euro … and a partridge in a pair tree…" She sang the last item, causing the man to laugh.
    My Stash of completed fics
    Tranh châm biếm · Shivam_031
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan717d
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    defenetly ai generated...

    The last thing Sam remembered was his car skidding off the icy road. The next, he was waking up to the cold, hard ground beneath him, the chill biting through his thin clothing. As he sat up, disoriented, he took in the sprawling, rugged landscape around him—this was not the world he knew.
    Empire of Winter: Sam's New Dawn (GOT FF)
    Ti vi · Alak_Samba
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan717d
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    really??this should be easy for him....

    Naruto kept on his heels as Shino kept sending his kikaichu out at him, 'What can I do? I can't get close or I'll get swarmed. There's no way I can surround him with kunai to trap him after he's already seen it. Come on, what else do I have up my sleeve?'
    My Stash of completed fics
    Tranh châm biếm · Shivam_031
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan723d
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    i dont think it has a 3rd person view mode xD

    that's when I try to move my right hand up and the kid does the same, alright I don't like where this is going, i then try to move move my left arm and the kid does the exact same as if we are the same person.
    Naruto- Amaterasu
    Tranh châm biếm · IMMORT_AL
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  • Bogdan7
    Bogdan725d
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    droped

    Ch 3 CHAPTER 3
    Blood without Fire
    Phim ảnh · RHpositive
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