Zhelander

I would have gone for Conjuration, Destruction and Alteration. Enchanting and Alchemy are more like side professions. It would also have made your MC more unique. Instead of going for the magic swordman that every single SI goes for.

From what I've seen and read in the comments this review is basically a lie and the only reason that the one who made it doesn't delete it is because it has too many likes and the author still dislikes the novel. Not like he explained the actual reason. Nice.

Really happy that this came back. One of my favorite realistic pokemon fics that doesn't go into grimdark territory.

Some fanfic about The Lord of the Mysteries.

Are you writing these last few chapters with Chatgtp or other AI programs? Because this whole "For the Horde!" and "For the Alliance! shouting matches really makes everyone look like NPCs. It's specially stupid when no one even played the game to have any kind of connection to the factions. All the rivalry came after the game came out, not before it.

This is the review that made me start reading the story....You can imagine my disappointment when the author completely forced some kind of romance between the protagonist and Seto Kaiba. It was so bad that it made me laugh xD

The hialarious part where Seto literally used himself as a hostage xD

Nothing should happen because Yugi never used Exodia against Seto so Weevil shouldn't be scared of him using it.

What's the point of the whole glitch thing? It just makes everything frustrating. Just give the MC a rare ticket and be done with it.

This chapter was literally a fix fic. There was nothing that made special use of the firekeeper. You just put her there, fixed the whole compulsion problems, prevented the attack, healed everyone, etc with fire that heals. But there was nothing special that really showcases how special the Firekeeper is. Right now she might as well be the DC Human Torch that heals. You need to play to her strenghts and special characteristics. Not just default to your typical dude in spandex that hits and heals things.