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I didn't mean to.
Author, can you tell me until when you intend to write this story? You won't take too long, right? Like 5000 chapters, you would do about 1000 chapters, right?
I don't understand these heroines. Seriously, the guy could be a huge stalker with low EQ, but he at least tried to help each girl, even more so by sacrificing himself for them. I understand if you don't like the person, but don't pretend to accept the things he gives you and throw the guy away as if you don't need him anymore after he's served his purpose. Very hateful.
*Clever Girl
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Author, you need to revise this chapter well. The middle to the end is very strangely positioned, it seems like it is the beginning and not the end. Revise it and put a more succinct chronological order.
*Fanta
I get pissed off with this guy's personality. Damn, you're getting free stuff here, it was his decision to skip, and he's still complaining. I'd rather the system punish him by taking away all the tickets.
Author, will he continue with this indecision? Because for me, he is increasingly heading towards the Harem route and will not continue with a girl in the end. Please, if he is going to choose this path, let him make up his mind soon.
Caniibal = Canibal (Pt-Br) = Cannibal (English)