I like the story I hope you keep it up Also enjoyed how you gave the blessing To the MC It was unique It's not like everyone else just hit them with a car Don't give me wrong I like that type of stuff but here's as much better

Enjoy your book thanks for the chapter

Writing quality is goodStories well Thought out Story in world development needs a little work Hope against picked up pretty quickly Love to read more

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