Live_A_Legend
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I really dont understand the buffoons who keep reading this. “Hows the mc a problem?”, “Never seen a novel like this”, “Best novel ive read”, “Are we even reading the same novel?”. Like yeah we all are reading that same mid ass novel. Like one review said, its pretty bad. The story line and progression is horrendous by 40chp in. You even make it an OP MC and i get that but holy do you take it to another level. Like yeah Op Mc’s are cool and all but hes like E rank physically and you have him destroying B ranks without using any abilities even. And dont get me started on the one guy talking about how the Mc contradicts himself, cuz its wildly true. It very much is a rushed dumpster fire of a novel. I thought it would slow down, explain a little more, maybe have some more detail besides pretty much a punch here, a kick there, and a sword swing over there. Even i could go into a lot more detail in this review but i dont have time to list everything that could be improved w this. And the complete random homophobia threw me for a loop. Like if there was any background for him to be like that id understand but theres none. A scene where whats her face hugs miss #7 strongest and mc loses his shit and had a hissy fit. Its not like he walked in on then making out, it didnt make any sense. All in all, pretty low tier story. Only worth if you wanna turn off your brain.
its not a permanent nerf lol, itll be for like 5 chapters
2 sentances in and already contradicting yourself smh my head 🤦
its orange starting at 200,000 and gold at 1,000,000. that guy is wrong.
How is the word pa.treon censored and yet this man can type 90% of his chapters for every fic as a pa.treon advertisement and has yet to get deleted or banned. His fics are like hot steamy garbage on the side of the road anyway. Dont waste ur money.
holy lord. author, what in the spaghetti is going on. why are you using residential so much.
you thought this first sentence out way too much.
bruh, there are other words besides ‘resident’. neighborhood? houses?