Teltara

it was a really good book I was disappointed that you started re writing it I was just getting to the part they were trying to cure uma so I hope you can update fast please again you are really good at writing this stuff

good direction and story but if I can ask you to go back and change the names to English or correct them that is the only thing that makes me not want to read this don't worry I will still read it but to constantly change names in my head is very confusing like rocky to Loki or yin bin to Wilson Fisk thanks

is it possible for you to hire or have an editor look over it i know im just on the first few chapters and it might get better later but i am getting so confused with them talking and stuff honestly if it wasn't because i also read on bable novels and they most of the time have bad translations ind i have to pu it together in my head to make it make sense then i would be completely lost honestly i really like this book and the thought process it is just the conversations that are getting me confused

HE KILLED KENNY HAHAHAH

same it is a slow start but maby you could use the Coliseum to level him up or have him offend the 2nd year king to the point that he needs to go outside the academy to train

good book but a little bit to messy very hard to track what is going on also you might want to go back through and fix the he/she errors but over all a genuinely good book

i honestly think that you should go with the dc/arrowverse then have him fall in love or somthing or you can do flashverse where he gets hit by the dark matter wave and loses his memory and has to work with the flash to get them back or something

this book is very good and i dont think you should stop writing it and continue after he unsealed gaia maybe multiverse travel or something idk but i hope you dont stop writing it

i think after this there should be a major time skip to xmen first class