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nope.... well you're mostly correct but--- FIND OUT NEXT TIME IN THE NEXT EPISODE OF ----

thanks for spotting the mistake

hohoho you'll be surprised

not killing anybody but tell me what do you think about the story and what needs to be improved?

Author here. Reviewing my own book. If you're reading this, just know that you're awesome! You can and will achieve everything you wanted if you work for it! Cheers!

I could just tell you.... but where's the fun in that?

Thanks for this I'll correct it.

no no no i go through all that so you dont have to

which one

finally someone sees the pun