MartyUrsus

His eyes where reddish amber not brown

Update your tags with a harem tag please it would have saved me like 2 hours of reading just to be super dissatisfied with the way the story is presented .

In the next chapter He goes Into Detail on how people don’t use keyboards anymore.

Those are a good contender

Its getting annoying with the physical abuse

I turned on paragraph comments to say this exact thing. TY

Nah I’d rather be erased from existence then be a slave to some cockroache god.

No because he is a child in America I don’t care if you are the smartest person in the world a 12 year old can NOT SMOKE. They also can not drive. It’s illegal. Explain why I would want to read something that makes no sense, and goes against American core values?

This paragraph needs work. The ROB is speaking to the Mc so he does not need to say ”his “ it should be your also the Mc is a male so make sure the pronouns are correct

Any story that has a chapter like this I immediately stop reading