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I'm not going to give you any knowledge about the spy world you're getting involved with, and then I'm going to chastise you for not having that knowledge
did she come here for lu ya, or for manga?
well yeah, how else would yang jian be born in the world
then the fat guy would've probably done it to you
13 lines, author forgot one letter
Mc gets dumped by girlfriend, immediately after marries her sister for system reward, after which the system shows up only to give him ways to make money. Whenever he does anything people show up to insult and humiliate him, proceeded by not that satisfying face slapping. The face slapped people are moronic and insane to a very unrealistic degree, like blocking the door to a store cuz he thinks they can't afford to buy there. Major complaint would be peanut gallery bs. As an example the number of classmates reacting to mc doing something went from classmate a to n. That's 14 lines of idiotic meaningless commentary.
I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read
An enjoyable read if you like this type of story. Recreating video games in a parallel earth, releasing the game and watching streamers play it and peanut gallery comment. I give it a low score because of the translation and editing. Constantly using the wrong names for characters, flipping the meaning of a sentence completely, and doubling chapter length by repeating the chapter. Once it reaches premium chapters is when it gets worse, translation is atrocious. No matter how nice a novel might be it's not worth spending money on if the translation is garbage.
Interesting premise, mc isn't talented but is immortal so he can take his time. Good initial character development as he adjusts to immortality, watching friends die, learning more about the world. Later on once he gets more powerful is when the novel just turns to typical cultivation story style. He acts arrogant, enemies come one after the other, everyone thinks he'll die but then he shows his advanced cultivati - I mean mage powers. Two dimensional support characters that constantly need savings peanut gallery commenting on all the fights. Boring
An enjoyable read. Typical cultivation with cheat system novel, but no jade beauty harem or arrogant young masters needing face slapping. Typical problems with the novel as well. MC advances so fast side characters get thrown away cuz they can't keep up, skills and abilities used in the past become irrelevant (which made all the effort put into them kinda disappointing). Cultivation gets faster and faster before the novel ends pretty abruptly. But overall much better than the generic garbage that floods this app