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"you're lucky I came." 😉
Even old she looks really good.
Why not 😏
I like the idea and powers the MC has. They are atleast not the same old powers every self Insert chooses. But at the same time not a fan of the whole ROB interaction, and choosing power thing. These always annoy me and honestly are never done well. Another complaint I have is the MC's personality. Despite being 31 year old he is very childish. I can understand lack of impulse control common in teens, but the 31 years of memories and experiences should have at least given some maturity and stability. And why even make his body a teen in the first place? Or why not just make him a true teen instead of a 31 year old. Another thing I'm not a fan of is the MC's lack of agency. Granted it's still early in the story and that would probably change but still not a fan of what I have read till now. And of course the most annoying Ancient one encounter. Never liked this in any of MCU fanfics. Unless the MC himself seeks her/him out. Even then I rather the MC choose to learn magic from someplace else other than Kamar Taj because it's so overdone.
I just gave penicillin as an example. It doesn't necessarily have to be penicillin. My point was not that he should make penicillin but that he should employ others and show them the path. Besides the world of Planetos is somewhat magical, the people there might find other ways to compensate for the scientific advancement they are lacking.
You do know that many people share the same surnames?
I don't think there is a name. It was in the comics and only for few pages.
I agree it was not funny. But it was much better than what the MC did.