I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
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After all of that and becoming self-aware of his issues, he’s running away from women again. Go address the issues. Go wake up Harlene. Go talk to Carol. Nah, he’s gonna go try and find the flash.
And this is why he’s your worst character
I personally think that this is your worst main character out of all your stories. Personality wise and decision-making wise he’s terrible.
Do he really think that people would get hurt in an exam?