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It did, though I think Pandas make more sense since they represent Yin and Yang better due to their dual coloration, which is a good parallel to the ability that he got for the trial where it balances his Dark and White magic by making them catch up to each other. Plus, given it's an eating task, Pandas make perfect sense since they can eat 40 kg / 90 lb of food a day, which is frankly a ridiculous amount of food, making it a very tough challenge on par with the other trials in difficulty. Just because of how well everything fits, I honestly think the author probably really meant it to be a Panda originally but wrote Niffler instead by accident when first writing the task (maybe there was supposed to be a different trial with a Niffler as the competitor but it was changed to this task instead because the Dark-White balancing reward was better suited for the story).

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This story is hands down one of the best HP fanfiction works I have ever read. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that it is definitely among the best stories I have ever read period, fanfic or original. This story, along with another fanfic called Harry Potter Squatter, are by far the gold standard of not only fanfiction stories in general, but also crossovers in specific as well. I love the style of the story since it is a very fun and lighthearted read packed with adventure. I love the story and the plot because it is so coherent and flows so well throughout all the individual exciting and fun events and shenanigans. I love the characters because of not only just how well they are written, but also the dynamics between everyone feeling so fluid and the character development feeling so natural. As for the grammar, I don't think I noticed even a single minor grammatical mistake anywhere. If you read this story for even just a little bit it immediately becomes abundantly clear just how much love the author YoDarki put into this and the emotions just shine through so brightly in this masterwork. I recommend this to any and everyone, regardless of what genre or style of fiction you might have a preference for, because this is a true gem of a novel and I give the author nothing but my deepest gratitude for writing this story. Thank you again for continuing to write this absolute marvel of a story, and I wish for nothing but the absolute best for you going forward. : )

Good story with a good premise. Starts off a bit shaky but definitely finds its footing fairly quickly as it goes on. I like the way the system is done. Definitely give it a try. The release pace is really blisteringly fast. Please make sure you're taking enough breaks for personal time author-san, but also much thanks for the story. And wish you a great day ahead! :)

Reviewed as at the beginning couple chapters in the story, so this is only an initial taste test. Decent start in my opinion. A good mix of concepts from several different sources, so I'm interested to see where it goes. Crossovers tend to usually stick with crossing only two worlds together, so seeing one actively merging multiple sources from the get-go means there's more opportunity for creative freedom here. All in all, let's see how it is.

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+1 to that. I read this for a happy break from life. Pls don't make me sad author-san! I will cry if you do. You don't wanna make me cry do you!?

Already happened lol. It's okay mate, the goldfish memory strikes us all sometimes. :P