GonadSmasher08

fatigue, pain and strength, since when did they become abstract?

don't think like a normal people in real world. a being with IQ higher than 1 nonillion (30 zero) i bet he even code you bro.

well, if you think about it, he doesn't have a chance to kill stark. the moment he enter earth dimension, he was already being monitored by the ancient one. if the ancient one saw that stark will die, she will surely prevent that from happening or even the TVA might interfere to prevent a catastrophic future.

jo for the win!! and you better not kill her like in the canon or else i will find you!

bro, are you gonna update your FF Building the Uzumaki Empire Starts by Summons the Gotei 13?

just base on your reply and inability to refute my earlier statement, i am right. your book will be wasting everybody's time, your time and your reader's time. max level aatrox, all the champions in runeterra game (including aurelion sol and kidred) and all the hextechs? why not just ask to be a reality bender at a creation god level? p.s. a fan fic is heavily judge base on the first 5 chapters and base on how they use their wishes if they have one.

just base on your reply and inability to refute my earlier statement, i am right. your book will be wasting everybody's time, your time and your reader's time. max level aatrox, all the champions in runeterra game (including aurelion sol and kidred) and all the hextechs? why not just ask to be a reality bender at a creation god level? p.s. a fan fic is heavily judge base on the first 5 chapters and base on how they use their wishes if they have one.

this book is doom from the start. not even counting his power from his system and using just his wishes the MC is already very OP. i even bet my left nut if this book can go past the Arcane Story

i binge read this sh*t!! pro's - the flow of the story is good - it has a good story direction - the MC's goals are realistic - though the AI is OP but it was balance due to limited resources con's - need more details on how the AI interacts with the technology, how does he control the machine to operate since it is an AI inside the MC - need some details on the fight's scene - please use the proper names of places, like what is country is 'neon lights country? overall: it is a good read.

it is just "Moon" try google-ing it. you have internet connection, learn how to use it.