StellarJade

Constitution, Physique, Stamina. CAN YOU PICK ONE AND STICK WITH IT

Generals? Do you mean Admirals?

Kilo-Kilo Fruit not the Kage-Kage Fruit.

I've already forgotten, who is Shiro?

Standard MTL translation with inconsistent grammar. MC has no drive or will to really do anything. Not sure what you'd really expect from a chinese shop fanfiction.

Phone Worm... What? Den Den Mushi please.

For fucks sake Berries not Baileys!

Why is Hina here? It should be Gion, right?

Open the first chapter "Let me spend several paragraphs telling you about jews" What the fuck.

Polar Bear not Ice Bear