Flaashii

God ok, we get it man, can you stop getting him to talk that much so unnatural ...always hate it when mc's talk and talk and talk like they need to explain everything in one go it's like a duty for them -.-

If you like me read till here then you know that the author loves to forget even his own plot points and everything in between even other things and I think he even forgot the NFS game? idk

Yeah, I am out too got too stupid too fast for me like him even knowing it is the pjo world but still blabbering about everything to a goddess he does not even know, could not even read the chapter to the end so bad it got for me -.-

what ways rofl ...

So if I am understanding the last part right his girls like pandora is going to get pregnant from another man ? If so I am out .

It is a good fic but you need to check the grammar because right now it reads like you just translated it and didn't think to check it.

What's with the Corvinal and such and spells classes and not charm class are u translating this?

don't know man I like your other fic with Harry Potter but this ... I hate to read about weak to strong characters that need a long time to get strong, I hate the whole drama it brings, I read too many of such fics, and don't like them anymore, almost every other fic is a weak to strong fic <.< in my opinion. And this fic seems like it will be a long time before he really becomes strong enough and even then it will have characters that just one-shot him I am sure.

what poor guy stop making snape into a good guy that guy is the reason everything happened, hate snape.

Lost interest in this fic it reads more Like a Chinese fic and I hate those