He should have had Kagami‘s eye at that time since he used Izanagi in the fight against Shisui

Let’s see how it develops

The story definitely has potential but it would be easier to say more or make a better review with more chapters

He seem‘s too strong for me also why did Kaido locked him up for such a long time without anyone visiting or releasing him ? Also I personally think it would complicate things if Kaido died now

I find your story worthwhile reading although their aren’t that many chapters till know. Still I would like to ask a few plotholes as Yamato should be nearly 10 years older then Nami from canon. So did they timettraveled or how can they be as it sounds in the story be nearly the same age. Also what happened to her Devil Fruit - did she eat it ?

„… he fought...“

„… his brotherhood.“ right ?

Their aren’t many chapter to say to much but till now it was a good story which is a good read. Hopefully the upgrades brought by the orbs will be toned down otherwise this story will move way to fast into the universe and out of the One Piece World 😂 All in all I find it a great story and hope for more updates

Can‘t say much for now as their are not enough chapters to read

First of all I really like your story and choice of Martial Spirit. Although I personally find the speed of the story development slightly slow it‘s my own opinion 😅 Secondly I hope you will keep up with the good work till now und not drop this after a few more chapters

From where are you translating ?

Does someone knows the mtl name ?

Regenerates with blood About the sharpening and strengthening I don’t know

Shouldn’t it be Kirito instead of Naruto ?

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Isn’ t he from a special clan, like fishman in one piece ?.?

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