Kenrio

author do you even thought about what if the D in one piece mean devil, and if Devil fruits are nothing more than a fragment of a elemental 'conqueror' haki?a conqueror of a D aka Devil? in one piece many characters are show using elemental power using conqueror haki, what if at the highest level someone can even conquer and control esoteric elements ?

Flr some reason this author have the distorted view that femboy is not gay. Independent of what he think this fic SHOULD have the gay tag, this fic not having it simple because auhtor strange fetish is strange. And author even if you think only those that are inserted are gay, I have to say this is only your opinion you're gay too if you're the top guy. And yes this is a hate review because of the time wasted on this shit because of the missed tag

Author should use the gay tag. And web novel should make the cuck/ntr tag and polycule tag so only these that like can read. Really a low blow of grim to make use harem tag to bait people in reading without warning the other fetish of mc like being a bi and liking to be a cuck

I think the excuse you gave for the mc was a litle too unimaginative when everyone read in know you're simple forving mc to be slider so he can falow the plot. And while I'm happy about this site having more fanfiction of yugioh gx I noted that it's extremely cliche and repeated scene of mc participating in the exams with the peanut gallery commenting, to the point I thought it's was one I already read before.you could simple skipped the peanut gallery dialogue. Other minor things I noticed and breaker a litle of the immersion is that sometimes you suddenly go from first pov to third. And you switching quick-spell card for speed spell card that is from yugioh 5ds

Mc says how he don't fear batman but goes on a lengthy monologue on why he don't want to displease batman clearly showing he does fear batman. It's really anoying how much of a sucker he for the heroes and even more so for batman

Other than the grammar the fic is trash. For some reason mc want to go on a goose Chase and find a way to go back to his world even if he is in a extremely low fantasy world, already passed countless years and can't forget he have another body. Chance is that if he go back everyone will be dead already. And the worst of it is that auhtor don't make mc think about any of these questions, nor author explain why mc reached the logic that he have a chance to go back. In the end a fic that synopses make you want to read but 2 chapter already want to make you rage quit by how frustanting and lack in details it is

For some reason the supposed god don't expect for some lowly mortal to simple exploit the loophole like mc and make a wish that give him many power, the more ridiculous thing is to see this god permitting mc negotiate to what powers he can have. What's is worse is the excuse auhtor give is straigh up trash. To make things worse we have other reincarnator

I can see that this fic will fall in the rank, it have to litle content in each chapter the only thing that was balancing this was the 3 chapters

?mc fruit is earthquake fruit not gravity fruit

For some reason even with mc have white beard powers and potential author decide to give mc the super soldier serum. As for why, author simple don't give a reason