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His aspirations changed to going to the beach? '-' wait, am I confusing 2 stories here? Wasn't he the gamer that had no friends, or?

I must say, I'm also relieved that we're past the revenge arc xD I thought this entire thing is going to be about revenge, and I'm so glad it isn't.

Ok. So before he got the system, he only had 1 friend, who didn't exactly have that strong of a relationship with. He used to play games all the time. and school wasn't a priority to him. After he got the system and became a vampire, he found a better friend(Emmet), he became amazing at studying that he already learned everything that he needs to learn in highschool (school isn't a priority). his life became a game and he stopped playing video games. And now he's speaking as if he saw school differently before and would hangout with people usually. My guy is probably speaking more with the Cullins now than anybody before. Where is the intelligence exactly? Lack of awareness, revenge driven, forced plot. He was speaking about how he cant go out in the sun... my guy is living in Forks, and plays videogames all day... where is the sun? You were a vampire by nickname, and now you are an actual vampire. AAAARGH! 10 intelligence down the drain. At least give him magic or something so he can finally use it xD

“Before you embark on a journey of revenge, dig two graves.” – Confucius “Holding onto anger is like drinking poison and expecting the other person to die.” – Buddha “There is no revenge so complete as forgiveness.” – Josh Billings Forgiveness and moving forward ultimately bring peace and strength. BUT!!! “The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong.” – Mahatma Gandhi

took the words out of my hands xD

It's probably about objective morality rather than subjective.

But it wasn't "Edward" though... it was the whole family. This entire plot feels forced... It's not about hypocrisy, but lack of consistency. The family, as depicted in this fan-fic, is different from how it is in the movies. So how come the events are still the same? The MC is taking this revenge thing waaaay out of order that I don't feel like wanting to support him. He's supposed to be supper intelligent, yet most of his thoughts and actions portray the opposite. And it's because of the inconsistency that I feel frustrated, rather than because he wants to take revenge.

max intelligence :)

max intelligence :o

too bad they have a mind reader, huh!?