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She is a mobster, dating an underage kid while looking like something from Zootopia. All that's missing is degenerate tattoo'd on her fur.
The hero we needed to save us from the cringy underage date scene.
Datamining companies foaming on the mouth from envy rn
I'll never understand why writers make their MC give away information for free.
Yeah! You would think their skin complexion would be the inverse.
This is a fascinating fiction. I wonder if we'll ever get fic that focuses on this.
Wish you wrote an epilogue and called it the end of volume 1. That way you have a better start if you ever want to pickup this fic again if you feel like it in the future.
Rukia's relationship with MC would be easier to accept if you weren't stringing Yoruichi along.
Were eating good tonight
Reading this was cathartic, to think years later I would have a satisfying resolution to this nightmare of a story.