krishna0512

After a long time another coiling dragon fanfic is finally here!!! My initial impression is very good, but I am not satisfied with the grammar, Author can I contribute as a proofreader or editor to improve the quality..?

what exactly is happening?!?!?!!?!??! so he's konoha's lapdog now..?

this line doesn't fit here at all, are you sure this is the correct translation?

AAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAH why is this so inconsistent.. just in the first bandit fight you mentioned that he is Dou Shi, now suddenly he is Dou Zhi..???!?!??!??!?!?!

guys I dont think this is MTL at all, see author used the word "EARTH" which clearly a blacklisted word in chinese dictionary, all earths in chinese fanfics are called blue planet.

ah yes, the famous ichigo situation. that is one transformation that still baffles me, I mean dude "mastered" bankai in the same 3 days while byakuya was lecturing renji about it taking decades.

now this plot point is becoming a little stale, I think its been around 60-70 chapters since his Glaive was introduced and I dont see any hope of him getting it within near future, so basically all the universe points are being wasted as of now. because I am pretty sure even if he gets the Glaive there will be heavy restrictions on him using it.

reading this name as Baiji, I am 99% sure that chinese people are reading the adventures of "Huang shi Tian" instead of Monkey D Luffy.

at this point, it doesn't really matter, I am treating this as a crack fic and just rushing through, a chapter per minute as it doesn't look like author/translator gave any thought while writing this.

two words?