high_father
Lv15
i am a novel addict
2017-08-20 đã tham giaIndia
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
- high_father4 years agocông bố
i don't know what to say your story is good but it feels kind of bland in the same way somehow there is no color to it. and it almost feels like a robot narrating the story. the most important is that there is no emotion as the story went on
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