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LackOfLovelife

LackOfLovelife

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I'm bi.😊 and i love reading😂 i love to sing😊 and i love chocolates😊

2017-11-01 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife2yr
    bình luận

    your story is great but the grammar is so bad!! hahaha it's just so meh haha

    Ch 101 A shock to the world
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    Multiverse of Marvel
    Phim ảnh · thelightedghost
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    LackOfLovelife2yr
    trả lời Draser_Spartan

    haha he should have named it "dat knee"

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    Multiverse of Marvel
    Phim ảnh · thelightedghost
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife2yr
     công bố

    So I tried really hard to continue on, but the way it was written sounds so unlively in my mind. The way it was written does not give life to the characters is what puts me off it. It has potential but once you read it, the words, the sentence construction gives off an impression that the writer does not have English as their first language. They used some deep words in the wrong time and ways. It's just awkward in a sense that it's not enjoyable to read, because It's like you are reading bible with wrong grammars and horrible sentence construction, in others words, boring, lifeless and truly unremarkable.

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    Transmigrated as a Ghost
    Kỳ huyễn · MegaC
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife2yr
    bình luận

    i wish he could erase us all out.

    If this was it... if this was what humanity was... then he didn't want to be a hero who protected these so-called humans anymore. Humankind was not worth saving. Humanity was not worth any sacrifice.
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Kỳ huyễn · Demonic_angel
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife2yr
    bình luận

    it should be "aren't I?", not "isn't he"

    "Hahaha, yes, father is the best, isn't he?" The man said as he laughed out loud.
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Kỳ huyễn · Demonic_angel
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời Alcheluk

    it s not famous because it of the grammar. it became not appealing the moment the grammatical errors really really fast escalated from worse to worst.

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    Doomsday Pillars
    Khoa huyễn · Avan
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời Kaleb_Besufikad

    y dont u create ur own story then put ur suggestion to ur story?

    "Compound V, Augmentation Drug, Crystalline, T-virus, G-virus, CPH4, NZT-48."
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Khoa huyễn · Darkness Black Bear
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời JimmyBlah

    yes?

    Tonight, he would only have the company of his right hand, or maybe his left? He is ambidextrous after all.
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Phim ảnh · AlienWarlord
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời T_JR

    im right handed want some help?

    Tonight, he would only have the company of his right hand, or maybe his left? He is ambidextrous after all.
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Phim ảnh · AlienWarlord
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời Ruined_Herrscher

    HAHAHHAHAHAHHA that fkin hit me dude

    C102 Ariana
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Phim ảnh · AlienWarlord
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    bình luận

    if i wasnt voting with my power stones before, thi got me. haaha

    'ENEMIES OF THE HEIR BEWARE'
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Phim ảnh · AlienWarlord
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    bình luận

    *Zuke could only follow her cautiously.

    She was quite happy and walked hastily there. Zuke only followed but was cautious; the other few guards also came.
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    0X0X0X0X0X0XX00X
    Tranh châm biếm · Anas_Nazim
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời Just_ForFun

    r usome **** sick who lobe harem? lord have mercy with your lonely horny self.

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    Reincarnated as Superman
    Tranh châm biếm · Avi2112
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời TheOnlyKing

    trash site? bro the only trash here is u.

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    My Mother Told Me
    Ti vi · MedTryglaw
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời LackOfLovelife

    so*

    Today is the start of Ouigab's Inter-collegiate sports festival week. Due to this event, classes from all the universities attending the festival will be suspended, which means basically a free week to students who are non-sports fans. Tayaw is a baseball fan, but because baseball and cricket are not big in Teungeb, there is no event he is planning to watch. What he wants to do, on the other hand is to go home to Okuba and spend time with his family for the week. After waking up at 7am, he went out to shop for things he wants to bring back home to Okuba. He bought things like shoes and jeans for Payew, Agew, and Liboo; and a handbag and a purse for Kilat. He also bought two laptops, each for Payew to use for school and for Kilat to use for her teacher stuff. He stopped himself in buying mobile phones for Payew and Agew because he knows that smartphone addiction is a thing in the future and he does not want them having it early. He also bought some of Ouigab's famous local candies and snacks for Agew and Payew to enjoy. Finally, through Chala, he bought the best bottles of Whiskey and Scotch for Liboo. After shopping, he started packing his clothes, two boxes of his Fairy Tales, and the stuff he shopped, and fastened them in the back of his pick-up truck and went to his favorite diner for lunch.
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    Jack of Arts
    Thành thị · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời KingofPlatter

    yes, indeed. i feel do asian about it. lol

    Today is the start of Ouigab's Inter-collegiate sports festival week. Due to this event, classes from all the universities attending the festival will be suspended, which means basically a free week to students who are non-sports fans. Tayaw is a baseball fan, but because baseball and cricket are not big in Teungeb, there is no event he is planning to watch. What he wants to do, on the other hand is to go home to Okuba and spend time with his family for the week. After waking up at 7am, he went out to shop for things he wants to bring back home to Okuba. He bought things like shoes and jeans for Payew, Agew, and Liboo; and a handbag and a purse for Kilat. He also bought two laptops, each for Payew to use for school and for Kilat to use for her teacher stuff. He stopped himself in buying mobile phones for Payew and Agew because he knows that smartphone addiction is a thing in the future and he does not want them having it early. He also bought some of Ouigab's famous local candies and snacks for Agew and Payew to enjoy. Finally, through Chala, he bought the best bottles of Whiskey and Scotch for Liboo. After shopping, he started packing his clothes, two boxes of his Fairy Tales, and the stuff he shopped, and fastened them in the back of his pick-up truck and went to his favorite diner for lunch.
    altalt
    Jack of Arts
    Thành thị · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    bình luận

    these one detail i do not need.

    With Tayaw's assistance, it's as if Liboo got younger by a few years. That may also have led to more steamy nights between me and Liboo, which we never had in a few years. I was reminded of how good of a lover Liboo is.
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    Jack of Arts
    Thành thị · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    trả lời Mr_Imagination

    I just noticed it tooo!! hahaha

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    Jack of Arts
    Thành thị · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    bình luận

    Kilat sounds like the vagina in my language. lol.

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    Jack of Arts
    Thành thị · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • LackOfLovelife
    LackOfLovelife3yr
    bình luận

    what better??! bitter, it's bitter.

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    Jack of Arts
    Thành thị · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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