Imperator_

This is a stolen novel! The actual novel can be read on Royal Road. Try not being so pathetic next time. ...............................................................................................

What fallacious logic; I'm almost gawking at the irrationality of this all.

Rather use incomprehensible instead of un-understandable.

Way too much usage of 'this'. 'this aura' 'this glossy colour' Rather use 'a' or 'an', 'this' would indicate that we have already been introduced to the thing you are mentioning for the first time. We have not been introduced to it yet.