Lord_Harven

For a Fanfic its good overall if you compare it to other ff this is great even, the only problem I have is ryan aquire strenght too fast that itself is okay but there are no rest between like take some vacation in other world or have some hobbies like brewing drinks, concoct potion, cooking foods, forging weapons, crafting artifacts and then sells it you know like foodstand, restaurant or just create a shop where he can sell many things as his hobby do something mundane and enjoys it not everything needs to fighting or training since he is already too much powerful in some worlds

Or in campione, you know when they killed a heretic god they take their authorities

He is very much overpowered in this place have you ever thought that he can relax in this place, you know like create a food stall, potion store or Pub with his own brewed alcohol since you said in another chapter ryan wanted to create his own beverages just for fun, since ryan is a scum cleaner may its time for him to clean the soma familia then create his own beverages

Ah yes make his soul more beautiful then go to danmachi to make freya more paranoid in finding him

Stay focus on anime worlds or tv series picking the chinese novels will turn your power ranking to sh*t

This is the problem of most fanfic that choose to genderbent their mc to a female they still act like male degenerate and it form a mentality that they need a harem of female since this is a magic fantasy they can later find a way to change gender, I mean whats the point of making them a female if they can still change their gender and not act like it or accept all their changes in their reincarnation, with how many fanfics turnout like that it became so bland so i hope this one dont turn out like those since this one got a good start.

Thanks for the chapter

Yeah oogway is like the ultimate therapist if you want to find peace/balance within you