AndrewMurry

i know you probably wont read this but pls for the love of all that is holy get the genders straight its really weird to be reading about guys then suddenly there a girl you've done this several times

look i get your doing a massive set up but pls get back to the mc its starting to feel a bit convoluted without our reagerly scheduled dose of Erin's genius

d_m thats hot good job

It would be supper helpful if there was a page will all currently known skills with there effects per lvl because it gets really hard to keep track

hey i just noticed but the rare skill that increases speed is missing from the list. It would also be help full if they had a rank next to them so we can keep track like necromancy (R) lvl 2

it took me awhile to notice but every one of your mcs is severely antisocial and while some have actual reasons for it most dont. I get you want something to work towards but this is kind of becoming a crutch for you all your main characters end up with is like 3-4 people they can stand to be around with the exception of billy

it should be kept there guard up not kept there guard down

congrats on the new book

stuff can be as dark as you want just make it make sense you have a system guide theres no real reason for there to be an AI in the first place him being a little silly is fine but there are limits if you needed him to become an incubus like this there was no need for a race change a few chapters ago

honestly it feels like the time skip was an awful choice all the characters are acting strange as we missed what 15 years it would have been better to do smaller skips this just makes people dislike the characters