I’d actually suggest reading the Mtl on Novelhi it’s actually pretty good. This is coming from someone that hates mtl.

Hey, I’ve read WBMR before and loved it. Can you recommend anything similar?

It kinda was though. If you read the first chapters it’s hinted at that the game he was trapped in was a real world.

You’ve got 30 minutes. Or I’ll show up at your house myself.

Chapterrrr

Sorry to say but it is all over the place. Makes no sense.

By dud he means chapters like this, where it’s not a real chapter but an announcement.

You need capital letters for names and The start of sentences. And Punctuation.

I’d go back and edit the older chapters too

Yeah, that just did it for me.

Honestly it seemed really interesting to me at first but I had to stop reading at chapter 17. It seems like its going the cliche route of "keeping a low profile". Why would he do that? Honestly what benefit will this bring him? And he just had to show his talent as 1st grade. And he's envious of other people going to higher tier sects. So why wouldn't he show at least grade 3 or 4 talent so he can go to a middle or high tier sect? It's not like it seems all that rare as we already have several "heavenly genius" level people popping up in this tiny starter city in this one continent. So showing enough talent to be a normal member of a large sect is not "high profile" or dangerous at all. He just seems to be contradicting himself with being envious and wanting to join a powerful sect and then for no absolute reason wants to all of a sudden keep a low profile. I started reading because the author stated this would be different then all those usual cliches where the mc is looked down upon but we already see people calling him trash and looking down on him in chapter 17. Sorry about the rant😅. But i'm honestly sick of reading the same cliche plot over and over. I commented here instead of posting a review because I dont think it's fair to post a bad review and lower the rating of the story When i've only read 17 chapters. Does this get better? Does he display his talent and get a high position early on in the story? And I don't mean when finally on chapter 300 or something he gets recognition in his small area, then moves on to a middle tier sect or something and it's rinse and repeat. Again, sorry for the rant, guess i'm just in the mood today.