ShelMan

Very nice.

Alright, I like the story and concept, but it’s theses sentences that make the characters feel like a modern speaker. The way the characters speak don’t feel like a “midevial” way of speaking as it is in the shows.

Let’s be honest here, most fanfics that end up with harems end up being trash.

Didn’t mean to write ”chad”.

Chad

Once I saw that Chinese name with that Harem tag, I knew instantly that this is a pile of flaming garbage.

Bro read what I wrote again cause my point still stands.

And that means people should stop trying and let the world rot right? Better yet add to the rot ? My point still stands.

I hate these kinds of comments. It takes people with kindness and Morals to make a better world. The world is filled with suffering and hardship, it take good people to make it better. Also being good doesn’t mean your harmless, that’s being weak.