Sethnut

+100

+1

Me gusta como vas llevando la historia, asi como tambien que no te enfoques en forks como otros fanfics (amo la construccion de mundo), gracias por este nuevo capitulo.

Thanks for the chapter I just take a look and is already more that 3000 stones so ..... 👀🍿

The main idea of the novel is very good, my only problem is thatThe sister who was supposed to be the original protagonist is unhinged and reckless. She has no measure is her decisions and the melon eating crowd changes faces in less than three words.

I'd like to say he's supposed to be a modern man, he should be better than that, but after seeing all the excellent comments that see nothing wrong with that, I don't know what to say *sounds like Taylor Swift's "man".Pd: I have nothing against the first two women, but the third one.... Gives a lot to be desired, I actually abandoned the novel mostly because of her, she also leaves a tremendous plot hole, which I couldn't stand.

+1 James Potter deserves lose to Severus Fight!!!!!

No, just... don't do that

Bro, please make it happen A trap in the harem 1000000/10