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THIS NOVEL IS STRAIGHT UP PLAGIARISM. I was trying to ignore it this whole time, but it's just impossible at this point (chapter 41). This novel is a relatively new work and is supposed to be original, but it's an exact parallel to the Korean written and translated work "The Novel's Extra". It's the exact same book, just with a different title and character names. The flow of this book is a carbon copy of that book, sequence by sequence. I know plagiarism is common in the publishing industry, but for it to be so blatant is just disgusting. Taking some ideas or tropes to get a novel started is fine, as tropes and ideas are simply similar and just the skeleton. But if the basis of your novel is just straight up theft that you're proud of, you have a serious problem. Not only do you take the skeleton, but you also grab the muscles, fat, and blood...not leaving a single drop behind for the original author. I'll still read, because I want to see just how much of the book was carbon copied, or if the author actually makes an effort to bring something original. Honestly, when lesser known novels are simply stolen and rebranded on a bigger platform, I wonder just how helpless the original author and translator must feel if and when they come across their blood, sweat, and tears under someone else's name...

the novel does indeed have a lot of minor plot holes. this however, is not one of them. Mia, as of now is a minor character that the Green's just came in contact with. So it's only natural that they forgot about her when she was out of sight. it would have been stranger if they had insist to take along the sleeping girl to a battlefield in the first place. Besides, leaving her there can possibly branch into other plot devices.

hmm...it seems like Sebastian is still alive, I wonder why...?

ok... why is this useless Sebastian person still allowed to be alive? if he doesn't have a brain, what's the point of keeping him around?

They are still stuck after chapter 300.

Stop dragging out the novel, and give the MC actual development.

Surpass Lord of the Mysteries and Reverend Insanity? With 400 chapter dungeons? 😂😂😂 Stop talking out your ass. The novel is ok to read. But face it, it's long and drawn out for no reason. It's middling at best. I bet at this point, even you yourself has already dropped it 👀... well I'm just guessing.

We know it's a masterpiece. The problem is that it's an exhausting masterpiece. The novel is long and drawn out for no reason. The first arc/intro dungeon lasted exactly 30 chapters. Yet, the second arc/dungeon is already over 10 times long. Why? Is the author aiming for 400 chapters per dungeon now? Besides, I like the idea of the MC having a super huge flaw that he must protect, at all costs. But the idea of the MC being a slave to another is a no-no. From how the author makes the MC simp and subservient to Nephys so far, it seams to be lining her up as his future master. At least that's what it looks like to me, and others. This novel is indeed a good read. It just has too many no-nos to me.

This is a top-notch novel, no questions asked. The writing quality, writing style, world background, and update stability are all excellent. But, if I had one complaint, it would be; exhausting. That's right, exhausting. This novel's story development is like a carbon copy of Er Gen. Non-stop, never-ending action... that goes nowhere. It's like Usain Bolt breaking the world record on a treadmill. For what purpose? Where is he running to? Ever since reading ISSTH and trying to read Xian Ni, I refuse to even look at another Er Gen book. It's just too fucking exhausting! One fight drawls on for 10-15 chapters, and one arc extending for 400 chapters... look at this book... it's only the second arc, and it's almost running 400 chapters. Need I remind that the first arc/intro only lasted exactly 30 chapters? What does this mean? A dungeon type novel where the first real dungeon is already longer than some other popular books? Question. How many dungeons will there be? This question might seam useless, but think about it. He and the top 10 percent of people on the Forgotten Shore already supercede the power levels on earth in his first real dungeon, then what about the second? Will there be a need for a third? If memory serves me right, doesn't the current known nightmares go up to the fourth? And aren't there more after that? Well I went off on a tangent after I started writing. Bottomline is, although the writing quality is epic, the development so far is rather poor. Don't get me wrong, I have enjoyed the fights and the journey. But at the end of the day, it just feels exhausting; it comes right back to breaking the 100m world record on a treadmill - pointless and going nowhere.

Wow! This is still going on? 🥵🥵🥵 Twenty-Twenty-Two and the exp grind is still real. Yikes!.Oif! Let's see, how many more characters do j n